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Post by CHIMEI HIKARI on May 29, 2012 22:45:54 GMT -5
TOKYO METROPOLITAN GOVERNMENT IDENTIFICATION FILES FOR THE YEAR HEISEI 27 FULL NAME: Chimei Hikari (’v–½ Œõ) AGE & GENDER: Twenty-four, female BLOOD TYPE: B+
INVESTIGATION & OBSERVATION NOTES OCCUPATION: Cover - Hikari works at a manga shop. She acts like she hates it, but she's really an otaku. AFFILIATION: Yamikitsune Kai - Boss. Her first modification was her right arm; this was a required issue after an incident with a misfired gun. Her left eye gives her nightvision. Her eye was followed by her left ear, giving her the ability to listen in on anyone else's conversations (if they're nearby). A short time later, she decided to convert 50% of her brain to technology, to better control her existing modifications.
PERSONALITY NOTES: Hikari is a bit of an obsessive perfectionist. She is very passionate about how she runs the Yamikitsune Kai, so, of course, everything must be perfect for her line of buisiness. Also, with her jelousy of the Aoikazuchi Kai, she wants her group to work to be the best.If someone were to make a mistake, she would be very unforgiving, and make their life hell. Beside her obsessive nature, Hikari is very inteligent, and comes up with some very creative ways to get her hands dirty in other people's buisiness. Hikari is also very outgoing and charismatic; she likes to encourage her group, but just enough to keep them working for her. She is very vain and beleives that she is the best. Because of this Even though she is enouraging, she is very secretive with the group. She wants the members to be an open book, but when it comes to them wanting to know about her, she's shut off from them.
SUBJECT CONFIDENTIALS
FACE CLAIM: DEATH NOTE, Misa Amane OOC NAME: Star
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Post by TANBO on May 30, 2012 21:45:13 GMT -5
PENDING, First of all, if the kanji is giving you too much trouble then don't worry! It's not needed in a profile.
Secondly, we have discussed things and we think some of her modifications are a little extreme for our setting - the biorobotic technology is still relatively new, and thus things like hardcore brain modifications would be a little too far off in the future. We're also concerned about her ear - can it be turned on and off? Would she go crazy from the constant heightened sound (there have been studies on the adverse effects of being able to hear things such as blood and heartbeats)? What is the exact extent to which she can hear, and can it be blocked by physical objects? Please revise this section.
For her personality - you seem to be lacking a negative trait. There is a required minimum of five negative and five positive traits. Also on this point, we would like you to elaborate a little more as this is an important canon character. Do her subordinates really trust her if she's so secretive? if she has such a limited range of care for them, how does the keep up morale?
Also we're a little wary on people creating multiple characters at once. I know there are no explicit rules state, but I personally would feel a lot better if you would wait for your first character to be accepted and post with her before going for a second one, especially a canon. Remember that you have to post in the notification thread once you have made all your modifications before we will look at a profile!
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